Six Sentence Sunday: SPLINTERS #5

When I went to write this story, I knew it would have things in it that were personal. I mean, it’s inevitable that I’ll draw on my own relationship experiences to write about someone else’s. So I did a little research into my relationship history by going back to a journal entry I wrote after the first time Jazz and I really made out. It sparked very many happy memories and I decided to give the experience to Allan.

I lick him and taste the faint salt of his skin. It hits me again, that unique sensation of tasting another person and completely loving the actual flavor of him. Nothing compares to putting my mouth on someone else, even so innocent a spot as his corded neck. I move to lick up his throat, slowly, firmly, and he swallows against my tongue. The breathy sound he makes spurs me on, tells me I’m doing good. I need the encouragement, his approval. My new lover. I smile against his skin, and he grunts a happy sound before pulling my head around to kiss me again.

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18 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday: SPLINTERS #5

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  3. Very romantic and sensual, Thorny.


  4. So fabulous, Thorny. So very fabulous. <3


  5. Very nice Thorny! Loved it! :)


  6. Oh, nicely done! Sweet and sensual. You put me right in the moment with them, and what a delicioius moment it is!


  7. Awesome = I love this story.


  8. Erotic + Romantic = Terrific. Wow!


  9. That’s wonderful, Thorny. It’s more about intimacy than erotica, and I love it. :-)


  10. Can hardly wait for more, but thank you for this teaser!!!
    Happy Sunday :-)


  11. You’re killing me with these six sentence slivers of spectacularity. I want more, now!

    Lovely, this. Subtle, moving and very, very authentic.

    I repeat, more, now!


  12. I can’t wait Thorny, I just went back to re-read the other Six Sentence Sunday posts :) Love the characters already!


  13. Yum, what a hot and sweet scene (in addition to the previous teasers). I cannot wait to read the finished story. :-)


  14. A thrill and a delight, as always. Thank you, Thorny.


  15. Wow. Such a lot in 6 sentences!


  16. Mmm…hot but sweet as well. You are so good at this, Thorny.

    Erm, the writing I mean ;)


  17. I felt that, Thorny. I was there. Amazing what you can do with just a few sentences. As always, thank you for sharing a bit with us!


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