Six Sentence Sunday: SPLINTERS #5

When I went to write this story, I knew it would have things in it that were personal. I mean, it’s inevitable that I’ll draw on my own relationship experiences to write about someone else’s. So I did a little research into my relationship history by going back to a journal entry I wrote after the first time Jazz and I really made out. It sparked very many happy memories and I decided to give the experience to Allan.

I lick him and taste the faint salt of his skin. It hits me again, that unique sensation of tasting another person and completely loving the actual flavor of him. Nothing compares to putting my mouth on someone else, even so innocent a spot as his corded neck. I move to lick up his throat, slowly, firmly, and he swallows against my tongue. The breathy sound he makes spurs me on, tells me I’m doing good. I need the encouragement, his approval. My new lover. I smile against his skin, and he grunts a happy sound before pulling my head around to kiss me again.

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About Thorny
I'm a happily married, gender fluid, gay man learning to be an author, going to college, and doing my best to stay true to myself no matter what. I'm not prickly, but am usually sparkly.

17 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday: SPLINTERS #5

  1. Pingback: Six Sentence Sunday: SPLINTERS #6 | Thorny, Not Prickly

  2. virginia says:

    Very romantic and sensual, Thorny.

  3. LC Chase says:

    So fabulous, Thorny. So very fabulous. <3

  4. amanda2u says:

    Very nice Thorny! Loved it! :)

  5. Oh, nicely done! Sweet and sensual. You put me right in the moment with them, and what a delicioius moment it is!

  6. Awesome = I love this story.

  7. Elin Gregory says:

    Terrific scene, Thorny.

  8. Mary G says:

    Erotic + Romantic = Terrific. Wow!

  9. Anne Tenino says:

    That’s wonderful, Thorny. It’s more about intimacy than erotica, and I love it. :-)

  10. Diane A says:

    Can hardly wait for more, but thank you for this teaser!!!
    Happy Sunday :-)

  11. 007mc says:

    You’re killing me with these six sentence slivers of spectacularity. I want more, now!

    Lovely, this. Subtle, moving and very, very authentic.

    I repeat, more, now!

  12. Carey says:

    I can’t wait Thorny, I just went back to re-read the other Six Sentence Sunday posts :) Love the characters already!

  13. Hannah says:

    Yum, what a hot and sweet scene (in addition to the previous teasers). I cannot wait to read the finished story. :-)

  14. Susan says:

    A thrill and a delight, as always. Thank you, Thorny.

  15. suze294 says:

    Wow. Such a lot in 6 sentences!

  16. Alder says:

    Mmm…hot but sweet as well. You are so good at this, Thorny.

    Erm, the writing I mean ;)

  17. Kris says:

    I felt that, Thorny. I was there. Amazing what you can do with just a few sentences. As always, thank you for sharing a bit with us!

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